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>「-第5章- ~龍の中~」を読んだ感想
お疲れ様ですー。初投稿?こんなもんですよ?(殴)
捕食描写をもっと工夫するといいかもしれないですねぇ...。
後、小説全体をもう少し長くするといいかもしれないです。
ここでまだ投稿するようであれば、頑張ってください!
あ、名前はお気になさらずwふざけてるだけですのでw
 紅天龍 16/05/10 05:36
面白かったです、これからも頑張ってください。
 たくみん 16/05/10 17:37
名前、本当なんですかw
本当であればエアガンで壁に穴開けた僕と同じですな(._.)
 聡太 16/05/10 17:44
聡太さんへの返信

はい実際に和室の襖と壁に累計200発ぐらい穴開けてますw
昨日もMK-223ドットサイトcustomで穴開けて怒られました(涙)
 作者 16/05/13 00:20
たくみんさんへの返信

これからも頑張ります
また機会があれば書きます
あとpixivの方には東方×GTAの小説書こうと思ってます
と言っても若干の捕食描写は入れるかも(霊夢ちゃんをドラゴンの餌にしてみたい)
 作者 16/05/13 00:24
紅天龍さんへの返信

最初の方はこんなもんでいいんですね
これからも頑張りますのでよろしくお願いします
ただ小説全体を長くすると中3の頭ではパンクしそうですw
(実際これ書いた次の日頭痛すぎてまた壁に穴あけました)
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